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Author Topic: re: first lord's fury...the same mistake as Robert Jordan?  (Read 1118 times)
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« Reply #10 on: January 26, 2010, 09:59:28 AM »

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I don't think Tavi is Perrin.  This is book 7 and there's been no Perrin style problems up until this moment, in my reading.  Similarly Harry Dresden has never done what I'm calling Tavi out on right now.

Here's your quote:

"She threatens not to sleep with him until he Romances her properly because that is the motivation he needs to fix this giant political issue he's created.  Max and Kitai /are/ right.  Not because of love, or romance, but because of simple Aleran politics. "

It's the "because that is the motivation he needs" part is exactly what I'm talking about.

So the premise I'm supposed to accept here is that Kitai is emotionally manipulating him for his own good? 

No thanks.

What gives her the right to supersede his will with her own?

And for Max to help her corner his friend and leader using triangle politics?

Regardless of Kitai and Max's irrationality, what troubles me is Tavi buying into this utterly terrible frame.

The frame I'm talking about is the context that because Kitai is throwing a tantrum, and because Max agrees with her, that Tavi should shift his priorities.

If anybody in all of Alera has his priorities straight, then it's Tavi, at least up until this point.

And the idea that Tavi is tone deaf to political intrigue is more than a little silly on the face of it. 

I say that because, starting as a child, Tavi skillfully navigated the utterly alien and diverse Marat culture, cursor training in Alera Imperia, becoming a most respected officer under massive fire against the Canim, then he learned the Canim culture enough to skillfully negotiate with with Varg and other key Canim, and now he's got to unite Alera with the Canim with Aquitaine as a possible enemy, not to mention the vord threat...and now he's going to be a flop at politics unless he gets extra "motivation"?

Really? 

Motivation through disrespect?  In front of his new teacher, Alera? And then from his best friend?

All of the sudden he needs Kitai and Max to go utterly irrational and treat him like he's incompetent in order to make Tavi a successful politician? 

Sounds far fetched to me.

As to Shecky's many points:

I totally differ with the idea that this is a typical Harry Dresden situation where he realizes a lot is on the line and he makes fun of it like the meatball surgeons in Mash.

Exactly what happened was this: Tavi is lying with twisted bones freezing and being told that he'll probably survive by his new trainer, Alera, whom he's trying to treat with respect.  Then Kitai shows up and starts complaining about how incompetent he is, and tells him no more sex with her until he researches and then successfully jumps through a bunch of unknown cultural hoops, then she angrily stalks off.

Again all of this in front of the teacher, Alera, that we hope will be the x factor helping Tavi take out the vord, and whom Tavi is trying to win the respect of.

(Let us not forget why Fidelias turned on Tavi's grandfather in the first place, because of issues with showing weakness and failing to win respect.) 

It makes no sense that Tavi would do anything other than say something like:

"Woman! Do I charge up to you while you're sneaking up on our enemies?  Or when you're trying to burgle cold stones? Do I, woman? No. So you shouldn't storm in while I'm lying in a twisted mass of broken bones working with Alera.  I handled the Marat, the Alera Imperia, the Legions and the Canim...You take care of Kitai and let me take care of politics."

As far as me pointing out that Kitai talked to a woman who pimps hookers, that's exactly what that woman's qualifications were.  That doesn't qualify her as a more skillful political decisionmaker than tavi, as Tavi has a vaunted record with politics that I just mentioned.

This is not a dig at the woman in the book who pimps hookers...

...But why on earth should Tavi suddenly give up implict control of his decision making to a woman who use to pimp hookers visa vis his irrational girlfriend and supposed best friend?

Do I think it's nonsense that Tavi is substituting Kitai's whims for his own decisions? 

Yep, I sure do.

In fact I think it stinks.

I think he should have put both Kitai and Max in line, and the only argument that anybody has offered here to the contrary is that Tavi was right because Jim Butcher always writes Tavi right.

Well, I challenge that premise. 

That's the whole point of this post.

I really like Jim Butcher's writing thus far, which is why I'm writing here...

...But in this case you can't use Jim's previous good works in the past as a reason why he can't possibly have made a mistake here, because the whole point I'm trying to make is that I think it is a mistake to have Tavi act the way he acted.

What I mean is you can't say I'm wrong because I'm wrong.

You can say I'm wrong because of some other reason that trumps my reasoning based on logic, but I don't think anybody's done that here. 

Nor do I think anybody can do it, because there's a quite universal implicit meaning to what Kitai did, interrupting Tavi's training the way she did and putting on the little act that she did. Just like there was a clear implicit meaning to Max backing her up.

(Though if somebody does prove me wrong by logic, then it will make me happy because I prefer to be wrong on the subject of whether there's a flaw with Tavi's character in the early part of First Lord's Fury.)

The implicit meaning of Kitai's tantrum and Max's carefully orchestrated follow up marketing campaign is that Tavi is suddenly incompetent to make decisions without Kitai's tantrums to guide him.

I've seen a lot of millionaires go dead broke over EXACTLY the same reasoning.

And they didn't have to rescue the world from the vord with a Canim Army and all sorts of political intrigue afoot.

If it's not about sex, then why did Kitai say it's about sex?

The only content of her tantrum was "no more sex."

I don't really see how that can be interpreted any other way.

Finally, this idea that I'm being uncaring is laughable because I'm the one here pointing out that there are all sorts of innocents that are about to get lost in the shuffle (as in become vord food to be turned against everything they love and care about) even if Tavi is able to overcome everything on his plate already with an extra helping of contempt from Kitai and Max.

Let's not play feelings here.

Let's play logic.

Tavi splitting his focus between pandering to, cajoling and begging his woman aided by his supposed best friend, and saving Alera from the vord while avoiding two civil disasters with the Canim and the other nobles will COST LIVES.

As in: 

Scenario 1 - Tavi doesn't have to split his focus = more resources to defend Alera = more Aleran's survive/less likelyhood of Civil war and Canim war.

Scenario 2 - Tavi decides to pander to, cajol and beg Kitai and his presumably innocent but nontheless terribly mistaken friend Max, by spending some of his time researching and trying to successfully perform Marat courting (and I'm sure THAT is going to be easy lol) in addition to everything else on his plate?

Why doesn't he just cut off his arm too.

The same logic that says Kitai adding emotional bad feelings will "Motivate" Tavi also says he should go ahead and cut off his arm to "Motiviate himself"

In fact, why doesn't he just sink all of the ice ships as "motivation" too?

I bet everybody reading this thread would take offense to a basketball coach berating and humiliating a player on the sideline of a game as "motivation". 

And those who wouldn't, I'm not addressing you.

The simple physics of humanity, which is what Tavi is, say that less resources = less resources.

In this case less resources will translate directly to the loss of human life to the vord.  And remember vord don't just kill, they use their victims as fuel.

So this battle is already set to be very thresholdish, because for each vord victory you have to fight even harder the next time.

When is Tavi going to do all of this romancing? 

And if he has extra time then he should at least be GETTING SLEEP, or otherwise preparing with Alera or in some other smart way.

(Not the least of those preparations being Tavi's normally dope process of researching and executing the proper course of political action.)

Again if he has extra time I'm all for him doing whatever he wants to do, but in this case it's quite clear that there's no extra time.

My argument isn't for a heartless Tavi.

My argument is for a return to the sane Tavi who's been ruthless enough up to this point to put the lives and liberty of thousands, then tens of thousands, then hundreds of thousands and now millions of innocents in front of the whims of others, no matter how "well meaning" those whims might be.
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« Reply #11 on: January 26, 2010, 10:04:31 AM »

*sigh* Pumpkins are fruit....
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« Reply #12 on: January 26, 2010, 11:37:24 AM »

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It makes no sense that Tavi would do anything other than say something like:

"Woman! Do I charge up to you while you're sneaking up on our enemies?  Or when you're trying to burgle cold stones? Do I, woman? No. So you shouldn't storm in while I'm lying in a twisted mass of broken bones working with Alera.  I handled the Marat, the Alera Imperia, the Legions and the Canim...You take care of Kitai and let me take care of politics."
So you would have Tavi be an arrogant, overbearing, heartless, hardass politician, who does not care about the woman he supposedly loves?
That would have made me think twice about him...
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As far as me pointing out that Kitai talked to a woman who pimps hookers, that's exactly what that woman's qualifications were.  That doesn't qualify her as a more skillful political decisionmaker than tavi, as Tavi has a vaunted record with politics that I just mentioned.
Cymnea... who has about 30 years of experience with people from all over the realm, who is someone who more or less has been "leading" the camp followers, or at least is someone with some authority among them. Who certainly has experience dealing with intrigue among the citizenry, Who Tavi regards with a certain measure of respect. Who he himself made Tribune Logistica of his Legion.
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This is not a dig at the woman in the book who pimps hookers...

...But why on earth should Tavi suddenly give up implict control of his decision making to a woman who use to pimp hookers visa vis his irrational girlfriend and supposed best friend?

His best friend, who is, despite of his outwardly careless fassade, well versed and way more experienced than Tavi in the ways of the citizenry, and the problems one can conjour up if one is not careful to observe and adhere to certain codes of behaviour.

His girlfriend who has saved his life more than once, who has stood beside him all the way, never asking for anything (except maybe to be allowed to ride horeses a lot), who has been remakably selfless all along. Who is by all accounts a very intelligent, observant and somewhat wize woman whom he trusts implicitly.

Why on Carna would he not regard the opinions and advice of those people as valuable Huh

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The implicit meaning of Kitai's tantrum and Max's carefully orchestrated follow up marketing campaign is that Tavi is suddenly incompetent to make decisions without Kitai's tantrums to guide him.

Would you care to logically/rationally prove that statement?
I don't think you can.
Tavi's connection to Kitai is not something he thinks about much. It's a very emotional and basic part of his being.
Max and Kitai realizing that said connection could prove problematic in the Future, while Tavi remains ignorant to it, is totally in line with the picture I have of Tavi.
Therefore Max and Kitai teaming up to force him to realize it makes sense to me.
Tavi reacting to that threat and choosing to do something about it once having been made aware of it... totally in character.

I really don't know what else i could say about all this without being redundant.

Honestly none of your arguments makes much logical sense to me in the first place.
Tavi is the hero of the books, who has always found a way to deal with the situations that he was faced with.
Him needing to "romance his girl" in addition to all that big time stuff he has to deal with adds a human component to the story that makes it more complete, and way more fun to read. I don't care about theoretical moral stuff. I care about a good and fun to read Story. And Kitai barging in, furycrafting like a pro and laying a tantrum on Tavi was simply hilarious. :-)
It set Tavi up for even more stuff to handle, and makes him just the more heroic in the end.
The hero who not only managed to save the world, but found the time to take is girl to a romantic dinner at the shore as well. I like it.

You found his reactions to be out of character, ... i did not, as did apparently enough people to make the book a major success.
Few great stories work without a lovestory inside them. So why should this one be any different.

On a loosely related note: There is one argument of your's that is easily disputed. You said that to new readers Tavi' reaction would be totally out of character... how could it possibly be out of character for new readers who have absolutely no knowledge of Tavi's character in the first place. How would they know that, how you put it,"Tavi is James Bond" ??

Easy. They wouldn't.

They would read the following sentence

Then...I suppose that while I'm finding a way to get the rest of Alera to accept the Canim's help, and figuring out how to defeat the vord, and coming up with enough support to actually be the First Lord, I'll have to work an epic romance into the schedule.


Which I, and apparently a lot of other people, read like this:
"Great... all this stuff... and now I've got to add romance to it... hey... whats one more thing. Is my life great, or what ? "
Do i need to add a <dripping with Irony> tag to that ?

If you read it differently... thats your thing.
But interpretation of text is a very subjective thing, and you have been claiming logical errors, or at least a logical basis for your complaints.

I think this basis is very much subjective. Which, from where i'm standing, pretty much makes your argument obsolete.

Ok, this was longer than intended, and i'll be going now and i don't think I'll post in this thread again. I really don't see the point.
And that is not to be taken as a personal attack or anything. I just think we have totally different views on how some of the stuff in the book is to be interpreted, and that makes the discussion fruitless. And I really don't have time to waste on writing looong fruitless posts :-)
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« Reply #13 on: January 26, 2010, 11:44:02 AM »

*sigh* Logic was provided. LOTS of logic was provided. After this much effort, if you're still wedded to the idea that Kitai made it all about sex and it was nothing but a potentially fatal distraction, all I can offer is to suggest that you re-read the book with an open mind and leave the logic-first-last-and-always process behind. Logic alone, untempered by humanity and everything that is IMPORTANT to humanity, would leave Carna populated entirely by Vord.
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« Reply #14 on: January 26, 2010, 12:03:33 PM »

Also before complaining about the plot it might be best to finish the book in question? Especially when your missing key parts of the plot. Your missing out on motivation, goals and ideals that you don't get until you move along. your arguing about stuff from the earliest chapters of the book.

It would be like reading the first Codex Alera book and stopping when Tavi neglected his herding duties to get flowers for the spoiled pretty girl. And then complaining that his decision didn't make sense for new readers.
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« Reply #15 on: January 26, 2010, 12:08:24 PM »

For what it's worth, the "out of character-ness" of Kitai's demand and withdrawl from Tavi peaked my curiosity about what had gotten into her, and then later I found out.

I agree that in general, suspending sex from your partner out of spite is completely underhanded and wrong.  

But Tavi reacted in a way appropriate to his character.  After being cornered by two people he respects and deeply cares for, he actually re-thinks his actions with a new perspective and realises how horrible he had been to Kitai in causing her to appear to be a consort instead of his equal in their relationship.  (Because he was doing exactly that.)

So, (as usual for Tavi), he continues on in a rational and methodical plan to rectify his mistake.  He values her so highly that he would divert some of his brain-power to fixing what he messed up.  What exactly is wrong with that?  I'm not of the opinion of the Jedi council that love is a weakness, so to me, Tavi is acting as a very strong man in this particular instance, and not at all becoming a weak-willed man.

I feel a certain amount of pity for a person who doesn't realise that admitting a mistake and fixing it is more valuable than continuing to step on other's feelings (while still being wrong).
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« Reply #16 on: January 26, 2010, 12:23:11 PM »

Wow...
w-wow
wow...

That's all I can really say watching this discussion.

Elric (as in Ed and Alphonse?), I have to agree that you're clearly jumping the gun on your assessment. Kitai, who up until now has expressed the Marat mating ritual of "oh hey, there go my clothes" is suddenly demanding to be romanced. The question comes up: What the hell would set her off?

Max, who has the outward morality of Han Solo without the annoying Wookie or Princess to distract him, is a very important clue as to why Kitai is making these demands. If you know Max's past, you'll know precisely why Kitai would go to him of all people about being properly courted.

The character's are consistent throughout the series. Kitai has always found Tavi (all Alerans for that matter) to be somewhat dim. The Characterizations do not shift at all throughout the story.

And your comment about New Readers thinking they're being uncharacteristic makes absolutely no sense in the context you gave. If they've never read it, how do they know it's off?

Not bashing you, I just think you're going on a tear for something that really isn't there
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« Reply #17 on: January 26, 2010, 12:34:32 PM »

the Marat mating ritual of "oh hey, there go my clothes"

I hereby declare this to be MINE.
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« Reply #18 on: January 27, 2010, 05:53:26 AM »

Ok, let me boil this down for you:

Scenario 1: Tavi has 100% focus and no extra romance: 1,000,000 out of 2,000,000 Aleran's survive the vord, and 1/2 of Alera isn't ravaged by the vord.

Scenario 2: Tavi has 50% focus, plus more romance than before: 500,000 out of 2,000,000 Aleran's survive the vord, and 1/4 of Alera isn't ravaged.

That's it.

Pick your scenario.  I pick scenario #1.  And I bet I'm not alone.
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« Reply #19 on: January 27, 2010, 06:14:17 AM »

How about scenario 3 where Tavi defeats the vord, marries his whore and gets assassinated or ousted within a month of the end of the vord war cause he ignored something fundamental to aleran culture and has been used by the senate as an example of all that is wrong and all that led to their fall to the vord.

You think its not important.

Tavi does. Kitai does. Max Does.

That should be enough for anyone. And it should have made you curious not mad.
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